We were learning about the whalers who killed the Humpback sperm and southern right whalers.
i found it easy to pot my ideas on my peast.
it was hard to correct my learning and my spelling words because it was complicated.
next time I will correct my learning.
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Hi Maihi
ReplyDeleteIt's Isabel. I really found it interesting how the whalers came from, Holland, Brittain, America and Norway. Maybe next time you could ask someone to read your writing before you post it. I really enjoyed reading your post.Bye.
Kia ora maihi!
ReplyDeleteThis is Shannon talking. Wow, these pictures you've put on your slide is mavalise! When I was reading you piece of writing I noticed you hadn't put that many capital letters in your bottom piece of writing. Besides that you have done an amazing job!
kind regards Shannon.